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David M. Fitzpatrick     Email: indy {at} fitz42 {dot} net
 

#1: Write it! - #2: Proofread it! - #3: Match it! - #4: Format it! - #5: Introduce it! - #6: Send it! - #7: Monitor it!

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Step #5: Introduce it!

The cover letter is a standard accompaniment to a sent manuscript. There are a few editors who don't want to see cover letters; most require them; and some don't care much either way. If, however, your work has been requested or commissioned, or an editor has asked to see it for any reason, then a cover letter is necessary so he knows this is the piece he is expecting. At any rate, you should get into the habit of doing them regardless.

The key thing to remember about cover letters is: keep them brief. Don't ramble on incessantly. Editors don't care about the letter, they care about the story; but most like a summation of important information. Click here to download cover-letter examples, which also contain notes on why they're good or bad.

First, open up the letter just like any business letter:  date at the top center, your name, address, telephone number, and email flushed left, the editor's contact info under that, and the salutation (Dear Mr. Editorname:). Following that, here is what you should indicate in your cover letter, with worded examples following:

The story's title. Follow this with the specific genre and perhaps an extremely brief one-liner about the story — but don't ramble on about the story; don't give away details, don't tell how wonderful it is, and, if you can't keep it extremely brief and follow the above rules, don't include it at all.

  • Enclosed, please find the story "Eating Fried Stones in July" for your consideration. This is a contemporary fantasy about a young boy's foray into a magic he disbelieves.
     
  • Enclosed is my story "Solar Trek" for your review. This is a near-future SF tale set on Europa.
     
  • The story "Who Needs to Breathe Fire?" is enclosed for your consideration. This is a sword & sorcery story about a dragon's desire to become human.
     
  • For your review, please find my story "Midnight Snack with Refrigerator Zombies," a supernatural horror story set in the fridge.

Multiple submissions. If you are sending in more than one story (and only do this if the editor allows it), sum them up in the opening line and really abbreviate any summations.

  • Enclosed, please find the following stories for your consideration: "Solar Trek" (near-future SF); "Who Needs to Breathe Fire?" (S&S); and "Big Green Toad" (horror).

A brief bio. Don't ramble on about everything you've ever done; it's acceptable to briefly mention the last few writing credits to your name. If you've been published a lot, you can get away with listing a little bit more.

  • My recent work has appeared in Magasaurus and Ultrazine.
     
  • My most recent fiction was in the February issue of Superpublication.
     
  • My newest story will be appearing in the forthcoming issue of Speculationism.
     
  • My fiction has appeared in Magasaurus, Ultrazine, Superpublication, and Speculationism, and an upcoming story will appear in Juggernaut Science-Fantasy.
     
  • My 40-plus stories have appeared in print magazines and anthologies in the United States, Canada, and the United Kingdom.

Simultaneous submissions. If the story is under consideration elsewhere (and if it is, you shouldn't be sending it to publications who don't accept simultaneous submissions), let the editor know. Editors don't want to get excited about a story only to find someone else just bought it (which is why many publications refuse to consider simultaneous submissions).

  • This story has also been submitted to Megafiction magazine.

Disposable? If you've sent a printed copy of your story, indicate whether the manuscript is disposable. I highly recommend you make your manuscripts disposable. For starters, sending along postage to have it mailed back to you would likely cost a lot more than buying extra paper and printer ink. Also, if you're submitting multiple stories, either make them all disposable or none disposable to make it easier on the editor; he won't have to juggle things around.

  • This manuscript is disposable.

E-reply? Some editors (more every day) are happy to respond to you via email instead of snail mail. Let the editor know if he is welcome to do this.

  • You are welcome to respond to the email address at the top of the page.

E-submission? If you are snail-mailing your story, but are able to send it later via email or on a disk, let the editor know that you can do this. It's a good idea to let him know what document formats you can send, although bear in mind that RTF is universal.

At the end, close your letter thanking the editor, such as, "Thank you for your time and consideration."  And you're done!


#1: Write it! - #2: Proofread it! - #3: Match it! - #4: Format it! - #5: Introduce it! - #6: Send it! - #7: Monitor it!

 

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